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For Me To Share With The World
31 August, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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you are the love
in my heart
that I share with the world

you are the tears
that flood my eyes
as they release all the pain

you are the song
heard in my heart
as it echoes sweet melodies

you are the smile
that quivers on my lips
sharing the laughter in my soul

you are the shine
reflecting in my eye
absorbimg the beauty that surrounds me

you are the silent sigh
at the end of every
moan i let out
in pleasure

you are the air
that I breathe
as I share the creations of life

you are hug
in my embrace
that I share with a lost soul

you are what makes me me
because you are the love
God is sharing with me
as i share you
and my love for you
with the world
so they can
feel that love
exists

------- Author's Notes -------

Loving you...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (63.185.64.195) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 09:02 pm

Your Words see, Inside, Our Private Hearts

Terrie,

I love the line, "You are the silent sigh," this line speaks, for so, many hearts, that touch their dream and then, face, relity. Seldom does a woman sing, her heart's solitude and craving, for all the world to hear, yet, you do.

Courage of the heart, no, not its pain, but its courage, gives us all the will, to dream as you dream, and most of all, I/we, feel, what you feel.

Oh, I forgot I respect your poem, even though, it peeked, inside, so many of our private hearts.

MV
Terrie* (65.136.7.25) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 10:31 pm

Martin, remember that famous line?

what you see is what you get?
in all do respects..
what you read is really me.
if you were able to feel
what my heat i mean, my heart..
put out ...then you felt love...
what can i say i'm proud
of my man, he
makes me feel this way
there are things that
will always be sacred,
and those only he and i will share
i know you ask what is left?
PLENTY...
but if the world can feel
i mean truely feel
the love that my tears express
regardless of the pain
then i know they know love...................
don't you just love it?
I LOVE...LOVE.....
Megan (205.188.116.130) -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 07:02 am

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i LOVED this poem , thank you for sharing this.
Terrie* (65.148.209.134) -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 02:00 pm

Megan, i love to share....

a hug from God is forever..
and so comforting..
his love gives me the same feeling..
a true comparison....
a true companion...thanx...
 
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