Your Words Are My Bath Of Comfort...
4 October, 2004
Author: Terrie*
every word seeps
through every curve
every word soothes
every achy muscle
every word a magical kiss
each one with it's own gentle massage
your words are words of love
that wraps and dries me off
your words are an inspiration
every single one
holds me up so high
your words are a relaxing bath
awaiting and inviting
me to fall asleep in your arms
while you lay awake
watching over me..
------- Author's Notes -------
words of love shared give us strength... |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Monday, October 4 2004, 02:41 pm You draw a picture of desire Terrie, You can almost see that bath inviting, always you know what to say great writing, I'm off for a bath now.....;-) |
| Terrie* (65.148.211.123) -- Tuesday, October 5 2004, 11:22 pm glad ya enjoyed the picture i drew hun.. friends always get the best out of every drawing... ;-) |
| joyce ivy (68.19.189.174) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 12:56 am i have to say i agree with clive.... |
| Terrie* (65.148.207.181) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 01:06 am That was the idea.(GIGGLE) how many times has your man soothed you by his words, they don't have to be romantic, just soothing , letting you know he cares doen't matter the distance cause words travel like a ....... speeding bullet if you know what i mean...words of love become words of comfort no matter how expressed just the fact that he took the time to share a few little words...soothing huh? and but of course Clive knows the language of love very well..his words are up at the top... thanx... |
| joyce ivy (68.19.189.174) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 01:22 am I feel the effects very well, I have a man that is a good distance from me as you can see from some of my poems...Especially the last I wrote..lol..CELL PHONE HELL...His words comfort me so much at times...just the least little thing he says..just to hear his voice..The love he shows me just through his words is so wonderful... |
| Terrie* (65.148.207.181) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 01:49 am yea me too, after being alone for so long ..romance at a distance i wait patiently which is also pretty soon...glad you enjoyed GOOD LUCK ON YOURS... |
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