The Likeness Of You.. Forever Within My Vision..
Author: Terrie*


yesterdays have come and gone
many times in my mind

the likeness of you forever within my vision
when I close my eyes

when I open to see
you I can not see

your face I forgot
but not the love that you brought

I forget your looks

because I never saw you on the outside
but always throughout the inside

your heart glowing with such brightness
your heart I will always feel
it's your face
I cannot place
but thatís ok
because love is what it was all about.....

------- Author's Notes -------

love never aborts..the feel of love stays w/us for eternity.....


Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy ( -- Sunday, October 10 2004, 06:08 am


If you know has no look...true love it is always will never leave is in your heart...great poem....
Terrie* ( -- Sunday, October 10 2004, 08:19 am

Joyce, love never leaves......

like my new love comes back to another..
as time goes by (it's been 13 years) the face of my deceased husband is becoming a "SHADOW OF YESTERDAY" (new poem i started working on at the cemetery early saturday morning ) w/us it was all about TOUCH, with my eyes closed i could BREATH it all in detail..just from looking into my heart..(we used the eyes of our hearts alot)in a heartbeat..i can sculpture his likeness but to draw him..great difficulty will i encounter...
Meri ( -- Saturday, October 16 2004, 03:51 pm

The beauty of the heart

The heart has eyes So, if you can't really place his face, the heart is good enough, because it determines what type of person he is....

Real sweet lady T!
Keep on!
Smiley face,
Terrie* ( -- Saturday, October 16 2004, 04:33 pm

Meri, thank you thank you thank you

it is true since he has moved on to another life,i can still feel and see the love from his heart so sharpley but.... the memory of his face fades away...

Have a beautifully blessed weekend....."SUPER SIZE SMILE"
Name:                                           Remember Me

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