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I Asked Mommy To Sing To Me...
10 October, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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I sat down by mommy
and asked her to sing me a song
she gave me a hug
gave me a smile
then she sang me a song

she sang me her favorite christian song
it made us both cry..
I started out brave
but then I felt a tear
drop from her eye

she repeated the songs words
"Jesus Lover of my soul"

she put so much passion in her words
each time her tears kept streaming down..
but mommy wasn't sad
mommy was happy singing this song

when she finished she hugged me so tight and said
"a hug from Jesus is a forever hug"
gave me a kiss
tucked me in
and said Good night...

------- Author's Notes -------

Amy written with you and my children in mind....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 05:17 pm

Miss Terrie

I love your poems so much Miss Terrie. when i get bigger i want to write just like you.
love Amy
Terrie* (65.141.106.22) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 05:41 pm

Amy, AWWWWWW.......little precious one.....

that is such an endearing jesture ....you write beautifully , princess,if you were to write like me who would write like you? I BELIEVE AMY POETRY IS SPECIAL..i think you have a lovely way of writing.I must add i am soooooo flattered that you want to write like me, i'll tell you what the next time you write ...i'll sit besides you and close to your heart... while you write ,that way you can write with me at your side,i will be there i promise..just call upon me..you may not see me but i will be there, you will be able to feel my presence..God Bless you lil' Princess.... HUGS/LOVE
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 06:07 pm

Miss Terrie

would that really work Miss Terrie? if it does then when you write i can be with you too. that would be soooooo good. but what if i get stuck? if i cant see you i cant hear you. it would be funny if i heard you but didnt know where you was. i got a new poem now. but i havent put it here yet. i think i will do that now.
love Amy
Terrie* (65.135.87.5) -- Tuesday, October 12 2004, 07:22 pm

Amy, trust me..you will know...

good deal, you won't get stuck.. just listen to your heart...Good Luck..just LISTEN............
 
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