I Stand Confused Living In Your Dream...
Author: Terrie*


when you left for another life
I was no longer a wife
a role I got used to
because so much you and I went through

you had a dream

that lead you to me
so much you planned
for you the kids and i
I never thought that life
was gonna stop you
from living that dream...

here I live holding onto your heart
living your dream
as confused as I stand
I never know what to do
living your dream

life has presented me something sweet
don't know what to do
what would you do
if life made you choose
would you still savour
and live this dream?

------- Author's Notes -------

confusion...even in a dream..


Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive ( -- Sunday, October 10 2004, 02:30 pm

share a dream

To try something else your not cheating,
to pass on your dream to another life,
Dreams can unfold into a wondous butterfly,
so fly with them and feel that rainbow
Terrie* ( -- Sunday, October 10 2004, 04:42 pm

Clive, uh huh..

so hard to decide..
with life open so wide..
i'll give my life a touch of spice..
i'll take your advice..
and fly..
with a butterfly..
just to feel that rainbow..
and breath in very slow..
i'll bring his dream alive...
all the fantasies will survive..
i know everything will come true..
i'll make sure i return to thank you..
joyce ivy ( -- Friday, October 15 2004, 04:59 pm


Terrie we can't live someone elses matter how hard we try..we have to go on and fly high butterfly and live your new don't have to let go of the past completely....but you do have to live on...Beautiful Poem...
Terrie* ( -- Friday, October 15 2004, 11:27 pm

Joyce, soooo much .....

Ya got that right...Looking through the windows (eyes)of some one elses dreams is much tougher than living through your husband had some great ones, dissapointing that he was not able to live to see the ones we lived for him..i will continue to take on these dreams into a new life and embrace them continually with the same love that never went away..
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