You loose your love
And you cry
Your dreams end
And you try
To rebuild your life
And you wonder
Comments on this poem/writing:
|barb (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, November 19 2002, 02:06 am|
Cap I know you must be hurting at the time we always ask why.then we realise it was for the best. Your writing shows emotion. Love it keep it up
|Cpricorn (184.108.40.206) -- Tuesday, November 19 2002, 01:01 pm|
This is not about a recent loss in my life, my mind was wandering back to the past (as it does!)Glad to say I did rebuild my life -but other problems come to try us! such is life!!
|Capricorn (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, November 19 2002, 01:03 pm|
Forgot to say, your words are true - & it was for the best. Thanks for your thoughts, Barb
|barb (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, November 21 2002, 12:19 am|
Oh Cap I'm sorry I took it the wrong way.Tthere is a writing I did called Tests look it up on here.We feel the same way about events that happen. I see you joined the forum. Good. I enjoy your writings.
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