Angel Out There
Author: Nikki


Nothing Makes sense, Send me an angel to help me pass this test.
Is there an Angel out there, someone to help?
God send me an Angel the edge is to close.
Life is closing in, The pain is to intense.
Is there an angel out there? Someone to stop the rain.
The storm clouds are rolling in. How is this fair?
I'm slipping away, God help me is there an angel out there?

------- Author's Notes -------

My husband is in the Marine Core. He's away in Iraq right now. This poem is in regards to the feelings i am feeling while he's away. It basically says that I feel like life is slipping away while he is gone.



Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* ( -- Tuesday, November 30 2004, 09:02 pm

Nikki,i can relate...i know these feelings 2 well.

yet my love is not in the military...but... he is away and until i feel his heart-beat up close and against mine..then i know my heart and mind will be at ease...your love is will carry you me...LOVE IS STRONG...

great description..on missing ones better half.....i loved these words that you used..... a test on our ownself...a test you will pass... without a doubt...
Name:                                           Remember Me

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