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Please Be Kind - We're Not Superstars
Author: Capricorn

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When we write a poem we reveal our souls
And in doing so we lose some control
We expose our hearts showing wounds and scars
Not intending to be `Superstars'

When you comment on a poem then please be kind
As most people have enough problems on their mind
If you can't say politely what you feel
Then please say nothing - it's no big deal!

It takes some courage to share our thoughts
So we don't need people making us distraught
We express our thoughts in many different ways
It's our therapy to help us through the days

We're not in competition so criticism should be
Of a constructive nature - that's the key!
Remember as you read, that our souls are bare
And making rude comments - only shows you don't care!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Barb (216.123.56.173) -- Friday, November 8 2002, 03:19 pm

applause applause

cap this is good and true. I can't exspress myself in talking. So I write out what I feel.If it ryhmes or not. The reason I write my feelings is because then I don't feel as vulnerable. You are right people bare their souls in their writing. Thank you.
barb (216.123.56.173) -- Friday, November 8 2002, 03:24 pm

had a thought

Cap you should ask dreamer to use your poem as an intro to this site.I think it should be where everybody can see it.
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Friday, November 8 2002, 04:34 pm

Thanks

Thanks Barb I felt very strongly about criticism & the words just came.Anyway you don't have to make your poems rhyme, lots of people write in `freestyle'As for asking Dreamer to use the poem as an intro,(I am flattered!) but I've only been writing on this site for 2 weeks, so don't feel I should.I'm still new around here! Thanks for your comments.
barb (216.123.56.232) -- Friday, November 8 2002, 06:29 pm

modest

I'll ask dreamer for you ok your writing is good cap.
Time to share it Ha Hha
barb (216.123.56.232) -- Friday, November 8 2002, 06:43 pm

done

I asked if your poem could be used as an inro to comments.We'll see what happens
Shelley (199.216.176.5) -- Friday, November 8 2002, 11:58 pm

Wow

Firstly, thank you for your comments to my poem! It makes me feel good to know that others benifit from my writting as much as i do. Secondly, this is amazing. You have found one of your talents in life and it shows. Never stop writting if its who you are!
Grim Reaper (64.12.96.104) -- Wednesday, November 13 2002, 10:26 am


Was strage, was kinda thinking the same thing this poem is saying just a bit before i got to it, Was reading through some of the other poems, and the comments. This truly is a way of bearing your soul.
 
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