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I Look Out The Big Window....
21 December, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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I stand looking out the window
as the passengers unload
I wait there until I catch a glimpse
of the final passenger appear

my heart breaks
as it beats no more
I didn't see you get off
that plane at all

the tears flow fast
I wrap my own arms around myself
to ease the extended pain
I tell myself go home
but do not
start all over again..

for love hurts further
and deeper than before
so I go home and plan my days
to stay covered alone
and not take love in again
it has caused me heartache and pain

------- Author's Notes -------

Guerro, this is how i would feel if you had me wait for your love ..and you didn't show up

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Comments on this poem/writing:

J Freedom Long (141.154.75.96) -- Tuesday, December 21 2004, 01:25 pm

Window Views

Thanks again Terrie for your kind comments
Seems both of us were looking at window views yesterday...me looking at snow and you for your Guerro who might have not been on that plane We are poets' in psychic synch..another wonderful piece causing me to remember a dear one who was the missing passenger on that plane.
Love your poetry...thanks so much for another evocative one with heart nudging topic...Jerry
joyce ivy (68.19.179.10) -- Tuesday, December 21 2004, 03:21 pm

Great Job Terrie...

He should know how much you love him...just bye reading this piece...great job Terrie...good imaginary...thanks for sharing...love your work...joyce
Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Tuesday, December 21 2004, 09:07 pm

Passion

He is so lucky to knot only have your love but also your heart,
He must know he has you wrapprd in his soul,
Thank you for sharing your passion Terrie
Terrie* (65.148.233.122) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 02:17 am

Jerry,Joyce and Clive....

thank you for your embracing comments they mean so much when they wrap their warmth around me...
Yes can you imagine...
the love of your life..
your dream..
your better half..
not beinng on that flight...
tears my heart...thanx...
 
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