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When A Heart Bleeds..does It Still Beat.???..
23 December, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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i allowed
my life to stand still
for an hour today
as I perched myself
upon the steps in the
den

i closed my
eyes
and hugged myself very
tightly
placed my head between my
knees
and placed thoughts of you in my
heart
with tears rolling
down

my heart is so full of love for
you
still my life seemed to have a
void

I begin to feel this way
when I feel I may have
said something
wrong
or perhaps didn't say anything at
all
altogether ,I screw up real bad

my heart
bleeds
when it lacks the
touch
of the love it
needs
I try to cover the bruises that I
feel
as my heart is tortured with thoughts of
you


when I ask something
I do not understand
you send me away so quickly
with thoughts
that I should have known

there are things in this life
that are so
very new
and there is still so much
I don't know
about you

but I still allow my heart
the freedom to
feel
and taste this deep love I have for
you

tell me why must these tears hurt
someone like me
whom I am so much in love with
you?

perhaps I'm wrong
and there is something I forgot
refresh me for it has been a long time
since love was living in
my heart

I do not remember at all
it being like this
I can see into my soul
as it hides it's heart behind a soft veil

I can see the tears seeping through
like a crack in a
vase
I can see the tears flow
like blood oozing from a
vein

I can feel it's
pain
when somethings are
misunderstood
I can feel myself dying without
you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Thursday, December 23 2004, 03:58 pm

sad

This sounds as if you are writing about a one sided relationship, you are there ready to love and give, they are there knowing but playing with those emotions you give,
Terrie you are worth so much more,
you friend ;-)
Terrie* (65.148.215.196) -- Thursday, December 23 2004, 06:24 pm

Clive, bleeding out..

yea i guess sometimes a heart can bleed, and can get caught in ones throat..for many reasons due to pain......thanx....HUGS/LOVE
Megan (64.12.116.74) -- Friday, December 24 2004, 01:26 am

Terrie

This is really deep and I hope you feel better.
Terrie* (65.148.233.172) -- Friday, December 24 2004, 01:52 am

Megan,thank you.....

oh yes... love... it can cut soooo deep... when things are soooo misunderstood..i have so much to learn all over again...yes ,as a matter of fact i do feel so much better......
thank you so much for asking /caring...
joyce ivy (68.19.189.239) -- Saturday, December 25 2004, 11:05 am

Terrie

very good again Terrie...and I have to agree with Clive...you are worth more...love your work...thanks for sharing...joyce
Terrie* (65.150.170.55) -- Sunday, January 30 2005, 02:32 am

thank you ,Joyce...

yea sometimes our worths are deep in our hearts before we realize it we just get So tangled up in it..it takes strength to understand the ways of the heart and work out...misunderstandings...other wise how can we perfect something? thanx.......
 
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