As seas of slumber surge on me I drift
into a timeless world where hope prevails
and Iím oblivious to fiendish wails
that haunt my days. Depression starts to lift
as hostage thoughts untangle from my mind,
released to float away. The surf embalms
the pain of angry sores, while there is calm
from stressful storms. My consciousness unwinds
into a land of fantasy, where dreams
become reality. My wounds are cured
as Iím caressed with peace and rest assured
of quiet respite from my monsterís screams.
When tides recede I feel refreshed to cope
with days dilemmas; lifeís renewed with hope.
------- Author's Notes -------
This is a rewrite of a poem I wrote called `Dreams'
Comments on this poem/writing:
|joyce ivy (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, December 27 2004, 06:52 pm|
very good poem Capricorn... I really found it a pleasant read...with hope and a since of long awaited peace...thanks for sharing...joyce
|Tammy (22.214.171.124) -- Monday, December 27 2004, 07:56 pm|
Oh cap I loved this poem.... truly a beautiful healing indeed. As Joyce said this is a very pleasant read!
|Capricorn (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, December 28 2004, 11:33 am|
Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed.
|Capricorn (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, December 28 2004, 11:34 am|
Glad you enjoyed Tammy and thanks for reading.
|Terrie* (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 01:43 am|
i simply love your work...they all have this calm effect about them that they affect and touch the tender side of my soul..which is my heart..thanx for sharing your hearts words..they all are sooooo beautiful...
|Capricorn (220.127.116.11) -- Sunday, January 2 2005, 01:28 am|
Thanks Terrie ~smile~
|Netri (18.104.22.168) -- Friday, December 1 2006, 11:19 am|
i really love your work. wut a nice job.
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