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When Love Takes Host Of Another....
2 February, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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a very private person am i
yet I share and expose
the flesh of my flesh
and flesh of my heart from deep within
you have caressed all that i shared

you felt my tears
when love died in my arms
you felt my tears
when love came back again
you laid with me upon satin sheets
you know the color of my eyes
you know the taste of my lips
the flesh of my flesh
the tone of my voice
you have run your fingers through my hair
you have placed your lips upon my breasts
you have felt the warmth inside of me
you know i am real


you have heard all of my wimpers
all of my moans
you walked with me
you talked with me
you held me in your arms
you watched over me as i slept when i was alone
you felt the warmth of my blood when my heart bled

you have felt my heartbeat up against your own
you visualized and took a glimpse of my soul
by the playful words that I chose
you have seen me look up to the stars and the moon
as i pleaded with a prayer to help me understand

yet a private person I am
i continue to share the love
that was given to me
by one man
whom made me a happy wife
when he married me
as well a proud mum of two

the saddest part of my life
was when my role changed
from a happy wife
to a sad widow

when his mission was complete
and he had to leave without me
even though he is no longer around
I still find him close to my heart

I have you in my life
we haven't touched
my first love was the last
to touch my heart
and I continue to feel his touch
until you and I come to be
then it will be time to let go
of my first love
when we do finally become one
but never of his love and his memory
that I carry deep in the pocket of my heart

which is everso real
as he found you
to be the perfect host
to keep his love alive
so you and i can become
one

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luke Christopher (66.190.33.58) -- Wednesday, February 2 2005, 10:25 pm

Amazing

You have such talent and feeling. In order to be impressed, I have to be moved. I was. Very nice.
Terrie* (65.148.200.106) -- Friday, February 4 2005, 02:18 am

Luke....moved ya huh??? now i'm impressed...

WOW!!!! your warm comment placed me upon a pedestal so that i can reach and claim a star ...your such a sweet guy....
(whispering) thank you...
Amber (209.215.59.72) -- Saturday, February 5 2005, 03:56 am

talented

very good work Ms Terrie. I really loved your poem
joyce ivy (65.12.35.197) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 07:28 pm

Terrie

Beautiful again Terrie...you never have to let go of the emotion and memories of your first love...Your new love will understand that....You shared a love with your husband that no one can ever take away or replace...But you have a chance again to feel the love from another...thanks for sharing your beautiful work....joyce
 
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