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The Difference Between A Happy And Broken Home
Author: Ben Franklin

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They say home is where the heart is,
but I came from broken one,
always being made to feel like
I was a hopeless son,

put downs with every word Id speak,
never thought my parents would be moral beaters,
not helping me reach my peak.

Taking their unhappy existence out on me,
not once in my childhood did I feel like a kid should
feel...free.

Dad would go out for a heavy drink,
when Id see him staggering back towards our porch
my heart would sink.

The whiskey told him he was his only friend,
it would beat up his mind,
then he would take it out on me
and whoop my behind.

Mum would always say
it was for my own good,
It will teach me to be a man in this area
we call the hood.

Now I have three kids of my own,
thank you mum and dad for showing me the difference
between a happy and broken home.

------- Author's Notes -------

I just feel that their can be a positive in every negative.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 01:40 am

Good

I liked your poem it was sad though.
~Britney~
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 08:23 am

britney

thanks for your comment.I didnt find it sad,because like i said there is alwaysa positive within a negative.
Ben
Chikada China Chinese Chicken (82.30.143.189) -- Tuesday, November 1 2005, 05:07 am

Related poem

Nicely put, for someone with the same experience you kinda feel connected when the poem you read reflects on your own life. Keep up the good work
Ben f (82.2.255.18) -- Wednesday, November 2 2005, 07:24 pm

thank you....

I always try and give birth to a poem that people can relate to,glad this one did to you.
thanks for reading
kay_13 (68.209.157.114) -- Thursday, November 3 2005, 12:20 am

Great Job

your poem was amazing and your words come off very strongly i hope you keep writing because your poems are excellent
Ben f (82.2.255.18) -- Thursday, November 3 2005, 05:34 am

kay_13

thank you for your kind words.
like said,Ifeel that there is always a positive within in every negative.
thanks for reading
bling (203.173.207.95) -- Wednesday, June 20 2007, 02:24 pm

so tru

so tru that i wna gve my heart 2 u..hehe :)
 
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