She Isn't What She Seems
Author: Amber H
She always seemed so perfect no ever knew just what she was going through outside she was smillin tryin to hide the truth inside she was cryin from all the shit that she went through the truth was silence and pain was all she knew you couldnt tell cause she hid it so damn well all she ever wore was rants every cause the cuts so deep upon her leg they bled for so long then the pain was gone
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Amber H (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, September 22 2003, 10:47 pm|
this poem goes to mother if she'd just look outside her widow she'd see the daughter she lost through her bitterness
|Amber H (22.214.171.124) -- Tuesday, September 23 2003, 03:56 am|
where its says rants it should say pants
|Meridian (126.96.36.199) -- Wednesday, March 31 2004, 08:01 pm|
Darn, this must be suicidal tendencies. But, despite one miscellaneous mistake, I love the way you write. You write with deep feeling, and emotion! You can see the struggles and various trials this person in your poem has to face!
Have fun today!
|barb (188.8.131.52) -- Sunday, April 4 2004, 12:43 am|
your writing describes the torture of what our minds can do. Very good writing,you made me feel the pain.
|mandy steder (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, May 31 2006, 07:00 pm|
very good... i know know how it is. i hope you can get over the cuttting. it is baddddd.
|Lilly (220.127.116.11) -- Sunday, April 26 2015, 08:00 pm|
This is a really good Poem
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