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These Three Words I Freely Say Out Loud To You...
Author: Terrie*

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these words
don't mean a thing
if I mean them not
these words quickly
took on a new life
because
these words
are so true
so real
they echo deeply from me to you
i bare all and
i hide nothing from you
these words carry a tune
and a passionate fire
of my deep feelings
because
i am so in love with you
baby you already know
just how much
i want to share
all because

"I LOVE YOU"

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sweetvenom (192.168.48.139) -- Tuesday, March 29 2005, 05:11 pm

True & really powerful

Terrie, this was the best way to let someone how much you really mean when you say the words 'I Love You'. Those words has got the punch when you say it to the right person at the right time. Those moments don't come often and we have to take the oppotunity to say these words right from the heart. Good write!
Meridian (172.138.190.183) -- Tuesday, March 29 2005, 09:52 pm

She's back

Terrie, thought I had to fly a plane to visit you to post again! I couldn't agree more with Sweetvenom, because he said everything there is to say about what you've written. I love you---when a person says it meaningfully without playing, letting their loved one know that their words aren't jive-time words, then I commend them! In this case, you too! Keep it up girl or should I say woman!
Don't stop here Lady T!
---Meri
Terrie* (65.148.209.141) -- Wednesday, March 30 2005, 05:16 pm

SweetVenom,

i love your name...;) totally true... love is a very powerful and intense feeling...a quick jump start to a heart...and indeed those moments do not come often and may never come again.... one never knows when a life will be taken away.....saying these words at the start or end of a day is all it takes to show a person how important they mean to you...especially when it is the first thing of the day that you do...thank you for such a pleasant comment...
Terrie*
Terrie* (65.148.209.141) -- Wednesday, March 30 2005, 05:28 pm

Yes my dear friend i have returned...

hi Meri,i have been cleaning out the garage, and have been posting some of my work from yesteryear..LOL....
glad you enjoyed this...girl yours are my cup of coffee, my caffeine...i really enjoy the hyper me when i read them..LOL...amazing work ...you create...Terrie*
 
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