What I Will Be
Author: Ashlee B.


Sometimes I wonder
Why do I blunder?
I make so many mistakes
I often feel like a flake
I feel like a tiny grain of sand
Held in someones big huge hand
Sometimes I dont know
Which way I will flow
My life is like
One big nature hike
I never know what I'll see
Or what I will be


Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney ( -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 02:10 am

Loved it!

I feel like that alot can relate short and simple and simply good indeed. ~Britney~
Capricorn ( -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 06:57 am

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You have written the thoughts of many people and written it in beautiful Rhyme. I enjoyed the read.Well done.
barb ( -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 01:34 pm

so proud

Ashlee you make me so proud you write what you feel. I'm glad you are my granddaughter good work.
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