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Take My Hand I'll Take You Where Real Love Awaits
1 May, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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ask me how I feel?
he cheated
he lied
I feel so lost
my heart I want to hide

ask her how she feels?
she feels cheated
and so used
I felt the sadness she released
when her silent cries reached my heart

ask me how I am?
he cheated
he lied
he gave away
what you promised was mine
Oh Lord I feel so weak inside

ask her how she is?
she'll tell you no lie
so be gentle and honest with her
do no more harm to this child of mine
at her hearts expense
you gave away
the love i promised was hers

ask me whats in my heart?
it is so empty
it doesn't feel alive

oh God please
don't ask me no more
I'll either lie to keep my outer smile
but you know this heart of mine
and pain it caint hide

a lie doesn't live well with me
yet honesty is what got me here
honesty that wasn't shared right away
a lonely tear escapes
to prevent me from fallin' apart
please don't give me a hug
it will cause me to fall apart
my heart exposes the blood that floods inside

ask her whatis in her heart?
she caint really say
please don't ask her no more
don't make her cry
let her go
don't mess with her heart
i caint fix it again
she was the last of the few
she waited this long
if you caint care for her as i asked
let her come to me
I'll bring her home where
REAL LOVE awaits

------- Author's Notes -------

a talk with Jesus of how it feels to hurt

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (65.103.187.226) -- Sunday, May 1 2005, 03:25 pm

Our Pain

Our pain will never compair to that of a mothers heart broken,
Our Pain will never compair to see a pain you canot cure,
Our pain is a reminder of those times long ago when no one gave a hand.

Nice words again Terrie
Terrie* (65.142.45.148) -- Sunday, May 1 2005, 04:27 pm

sometimes we inflict pain upon ourselves

nothin' comfortin' in a shattered shiverin' heart that feels stepped on lost and empty, thank you Clive for your endearin' comment, it means so much to me to feel your words.
 
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