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You Will Never Love Me, Like I Love You
Author: Angel In Tears

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Your crushing me!
Please let me go!
Iím pleadingÖplease let goÖ
I will bleed to death here if you donít.

The more pressure you put,
And hate which you inflict,
The more anger and resentment I feel.
Never thought, that your Ďloveí could hurt so much.
Tears are gushing,
Fear is rising.
They mix with the words which are better left untold.

Iím suffocating now!
Donít do that!
No more air...to breath...

If only there was a mirror for these scars,
In which I could see the extent off..
Itís all gone way to far,
Let it be,
If you must,
Kill me now!
But just leave!

So no more fear and hatred scars could be branded upon our skin!

------- Author's Notes -------

Ummm...not sure what these words might look like, but these feelings just keep circling around in my head...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.106.154) -- Friday, May 6 2005, 01:48 pm

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Ahhh Angel... I liked the poem.. you spoke words you didn't kow what they ment but yeah it was good..britney
Angel in Tears (81.129.99.116) -- Saturday, May 7 2005, 03:27 pm

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Thanks Britney.It's always so lovely to read your comments =)
Terrie* (65.148.232.163) -- Tuesday, May 10 2005, 06:56 pm

Angel in Tears....

sometimes our hearts are exposed for us to write what it feels ,wheteher it be our own or someone else's known or unknown, past ,present or future no one knows.(perhaps kindred spirits tryin' to find a home ,someone passin' through) this is a great read, i truely enjoy comin' here on my free time to unwind, relax and read what ya create. keep that heart pumpin' out them words!
Angel in Tears (81.157.150.110) -- Tuesday, May 10 2005, 09:35 pm

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Hey. Whenever I feel down, finding a comment puts the smile back on my face!=> Thank you Terrie* for your insightful words. Itís kinda strange when a simple things like these, get me through a rough day.
 
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