You Just Don't Get It ! Do You?
6 May, 2005
Author: Terrie*
you just don't get it
do you?
you don't seem to understand
so much you need to learn
about a heart
it is something
you don't want to become a part of
if you play your games
to satisfy your own heart
only to break another
a heart needs
full attention for it
to survive
it needs to be nurtured
with real love
for it to thrive
if you expect for it
to continue to remain
where you want it to stay
much better hearts than mine
have been known to stray
and been lead away
mine has seen better days
mine is no different
mine can learn to taste
love that makes me feel alive
give me a reason for me
to allow my heart to stay
------- Author's Notes -------
when something is missin' |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
Meridian (64.12.116.197) -- Friday, May 6 2005, 06:24 pm I'm sure he'll get this because you made this very plain and clear! Terrie* needs you man! Sorry, just got carried away! Exquisite poem! ---Take care energizer bunny poet, |
Terrie* (65.142.64.234) -- Friday, May 6 2005, 07:20 pm He has no clue! LOL...thanx for gettin' carried away on my behalf..sometimes when a heart doesn't want to be known openly , ya just gotz to shut them out..send them off on Amtrak J/K ..on a more serious note: ya have to work it out..hopin' they hear your heart speak.as you hear his.thanx ... |
barb (207.245.229.3) -- Friday, May 6 2005, 10:51 pm Terrie I got from this you are ticked off.:))) Good way of letting him know he has to shape up or ship out.Doesn't it make you feel better writing your feelings down. yeh for Terrie:))) |
Terrie* (65.150.170.100) -- Friday, May 6 2005, 11:56 pm ya got that right my friend, i wrote this for a friend,so he could give it to his so called girlfriend.. as he was expressing what he was goin' through, yet as i wrote it i put "my gut and feelings" into it as i was experiencin' somethin' similar and i was able to touch what he had given me to work with..and yes i felt soooo good writing them down..but on a bigger note "i still say work it out .thank you sweetie you rock!. |
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