You Are The Angel That Shines The Brightest. by Terrie*

have you ever shared
a great feeling
about somethin' or someone in your life?
I have this friend
whom is in so many ways
so much like a daughter to me
that makes her one of my closest friends

I feel her very heart
and above all
I am very proud that she in Gods way
is a big part of my life
I cain close my eyes this very second
and tell you that many folks today
she gave a helpin' hand

each and everyone walked away
with a part of her heart

just as you an I do every time
we come and meet and share our worlds
many of these words
were shadows of many yesteryears

that others at one time shared
just as you and I do today
my friend allows our words to hold hands
across many nations and high above seas

even In a war torn country
we touch someone new every day
and we owe it all to
my friend , my daughter
for makin' it all possible
i thank the God Lord everyday
the great feelin'
we cain share with someone
are in our words
for someone whom has no one in their world
but the bullets
that whizz above their head
cain find comfort to read someones words
and it draws a smile in my heart that my words
cain become a part of someone elses happiness
not just mine but yours , yours and yours
thank you my daughter ,thank you my friend
every one knows that it takes a person with a special heart
to make light shine in the world of darkness
and you are that Angel that shines across every sea every praire
even over me

barb (66.46.241.120) -- Monday, May 16 2005, 04:54 am

caught my attention
The word angel in your writing Made me read your writing lol .I love anything with angels. I'm sorry Terrie I didn't read the whole thing , My attention span isn't very long lol but what I did read was you. I liked what I read.

Terrie* (65.148.215.109) -- Monday, May 16 2005, 06:24 am

Hi Barb,
well understood Doll, you read enough to feel and understand the meanin' of the poem whom it was written about,thank you soooo much for your warm comment,you are such a sweet Angel! much love.

barb (216.123.57.45) -- Monday, May 16 2005, 03:39 pm

awe
thanks Terrie for understanding.Since my brain tumor operation they took out my attention span too not just the tumor. lol Your writing is so touching to me thanks

Terrie* (65.142.64.178) -- Monday, May 16 2005, 03:47 pm

thank you for brightenin' my rainy day
Barb, with tears in my eyes ,sometimes i feel that my writing is all i have, i'm glad it's touchin' to you.cause my heart is wrapped into all i write. thanx once again your just too sweet,

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