Week 6

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Postby Leah06 » Sat Jun 28, 2003 8:03 pm

the other person that i was thinking about was brenda! They both did great!
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Sat Jun 28, 2003 9:15 pm

wow i actully thought my poem sucked!
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Postby Leah06 » Mon Jun 30, 2003 11:19 pm

i thought it was good!
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Postby xeverettx » Tue Jul 01, 2003 12:39 am

It was good!
"I've Broken Both My Legs Falling For You..."
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Tue Jul 01, 2003 8:51 am

thanks i greatly apreciate your comments!
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Postby Leah06 » Tue Jul 01, 2003 2:31 pm

its the truth more than a comment
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Tue Jul 01, 2003 2:34 pm

umm thanks
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Postby Leah06 » Wed Jul 02, 2003 2:26 pm

your welcome!
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Postby Leah06 » Thu Jul 10, 2003 4:17 pm

I know we are suppose to make 1 poem of all of them together but i had many problems because the poems were so good and i couldent fit them together. This is a good thing because not only did i create 2 poems but it makes me happy to know that all of us have different ideas and experiences when it comes to miricals. Great job everyone and loko what you created!


The best Friend of Love

I put my arms in front of me
and went to pull her near
and realized that my new best friend
was nothing but a mirror.
My life was staring right at me in the face
Yet everything was in a haze
I am living yet I was dead
All reason from this being I shed.
So I will stand here throught the night
then sit and hope and wondrously believe,
that we will be together as one
I pray the night will not deceive,
into the dawn my broken spirit will always fly free
I'll be sure miracles can happen the day you hold me.
Miracles are found in everything we do
In every movement you make
From the time you go to sleep
till the time you wake.


The Miracles Of a Child


Reminder of love
a gift from above
An angel sent from heaven
I hugged you up
Right next to me
And you looked
Just like a fuzzy peach
I knew I'd seen
A miracle
My cup of joy
was over full.
Reminder of love
A gift from above
An angel sent from heaven
Way up to the sky
From the nest
Someday you're gonna fly
But, for now,
Come sit at my knee
And learn to sing
This glad song with me.


Written by the writers of miricals of week 6!
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