rap battles (extreme language warning in effect)

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Postby Luc » Sat Jun 28, 2003 8:57 am

haha.. this is really giveing me a kick.. i like this forum ^.^
dont worry eve. just messing around they dont have to be perfect now..



i'll make your temples swell,
with lyrical power here,
lock you up in that cell,
make you wish you didnt put me in hell,
come back with an army of deamons,
shakeing, i know you are, i'll make ya feel it,
nine inch nails digging into your brain,
you getting confused i'll make you drown in the rain,
45 barretas up in the house,
shallow point vallas the size of a mouse,
probabaly the biggest THING you'll carry around, (think crotch there for the guys)
you think i cant get worse?
i'll bet your ass will be thinking twice,
once your in that herse.
everything comeswith a price hunny,
you winning to pay it, and die like a playboy bunny?
full of aids and hiv...
get on your knees,
you know your used to it,
now beg "please!"


(remember dont take anything seriously now.. just "fuckeing" around lol :lol: )
"The error of youth is to believe that intelligence is a substitute for experience, while the error of age is to believe experience is a substitute for intelligence." - Lyman Bryson
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Postby RinRin » Sat Jun 28, 2003 10:39 am

yeah we know! it's FUN!!!!!!!!!! hehe..

well now, who's the new guy?
comin over here beggin to fry
chicken
you think you're dissin?
you missin!
you aint got no room ta talk
i'll roll you up and
smotha you into a box
and shut the lid
cuz you aint goin nowhere kid!
make it known that i've got you
captured
leavin you for da rapture
ta take ova ya (this accent just cracks me up!!)
gimme a reason not ta
i'll rip ya lungs out
make ya scream and shout
like a water spout, your blood be rippin out
while i be rippin ya ta shreds
gonna make ya beg
me to be gentle
kid, you be mental!
you aint got what i got right here,
jus gimme a reason to fear!

heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..................
I left a flower on the doorstep, a weed that still remembers me.
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Postby xeverettx » Sat Jun 28, 2003 11:38 am

i can already feel your fear
in ya words its very clear
i got plenty of room to talk
so i suggest you turn around and walk
away
i got no time to mess with the games you play
but if you insist to stay
ill crack your head open on solid ground
ill watch the blood spill out but no brains to be found
go ahead and bring an army with ya
just goes to show you need a army to survive
i stand alone with a shovel ready to bury you all alive.
ill make you scream
and wish this was a dream
everything does come with a price
so pay up female dog before i stop being nice.
you aint got nothin carptured here
im already in your mind, i am your fear
ill cut you in two, a blade in each eye to cover your pitiful cry
and ill watch the blood come running down watching you drown
your time is wearin thin so dont even begin
to try to rip me apart
ive ripped out your heart and stabbed it with a poison dart
ill throw your lifeless body in a walmart shopping cart
"I've Broken Both My Legs Falling For You..."
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Postby Luc » Sat Jun 28, 2003 1:11 pm

lol!! i liked that last line



double barrow shot gun aimed at your throat,
loaded with sorrow it shot your scape-goat.
rape you and throw you in a ditch,
you were mine now your the roches' female dog.
i get joy by watching your family cry,
i cry by laughing so hard as they hold on to you as you die.
switchblades coeming out from my hands like wolverine,
sliceing and diceing you up second,
whatching you scream intill you cant take it.
i'll rippe out my own heart, throw it to the ground,
shove it down your throat, then watch you slowly fall down.
learn the worlds pain, let it burn through your veins,
i've been standing in the rain,
ever sence your god began,
so just sit back and dont take your life in vain...
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Postby xeverettx » Sat Jun 28, 2003 2:04 pm

lol thanks luc. this is pretty damn fun!

laugh as i die?
im not dead yet so begin to say your goodbyes
ill tear out your blades with my bare hand
stab them through your neck until you cant stand
ill taste your heart and spit it out like a work of art
your pain will bring a smile
every drop of blood makes everything worth while.
ill set you on fire, wrap you in barb wire and watch
as you expire.
not even the rain that falls can put you out
no one will hear you shout.
One last knife to end your life
stuck through your throat ill send you down the river in
a sailboat
"I've Broken Both My Legs Falling For You..."
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Postby Luc » Sat Jun 28, 2003 3:04 pm

i'll tickle your back bone with a blade,
blow your fucked up dome with a gernade.
i aint afriad to die, i'll be glad once you start to cry,
beg for life! sturggle for life,
like the sorry maggot you are.
break out with the violence, smile at the silence,
everyones dead, be happy now that you meet your end.
i'll stick my hand down your throat, tickling from the inside,
rip out your heart, and laugh as images flush my mind.
shivers go down my back.. ooh is all i say as i laugh,
i'll kill just for the fucken thrill
in the morning, you'll be missin,
on your grave, i'll be pissin'
laughing like a phycotic lunatic,
your grave, your love ones blood will be kissin..


^.^
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Postby xeverettx » Sat Jun 28, 2003 10:54 pm

i aint afraid of no blade
cut me, i want you too
ill be laughing when my blood spills all ova you
I wont die so dont even try
look to the sky and prepare to die
I wont cry, why should i?
nobody sheds a tear for a female dog like you
you know its true
ill stab your rotten corpse for fun, when your all done
ill let you melt in the sun
diggin a hole for ya grave
nothin left of you to save
this was too easy, i thought you were strong
i was so wrong
ill tear out your eyes so
you can see what i do to you
you will know my name
so you know who to blame
set you on fire...one pathetic flame
"I've Broken Both My Legs Falling For You..."
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Postby Luc » Mon Jun 30, 2003 7:37 pm

havent been able to think of anything.. blah.. i lose er.. yeah o.O
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Mon Jun 30, 2003 9:11 pm

aww luc dont give up! it is getting intresting! and very funny too :mrgreen:
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Postby Leah06 » Thu Jul 03, 2003 8:17 pm

yea, i agree and i hate rap! Keep going!
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