WEEK 27

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WEEK 27

Postby Visionary » Sun Sep 12, 2004 6:42 pm

I think we should take a fun route for this weeks topic. How about FALLING IN LOVE. All the feelings that go along with it. I don't know if it has been used but I would like to see what everyone comes up with. Have a great and safe week!

Heres a poll question....WHERE DOES ALL THE WHITE STUFF GO WHEN THE SNOW MELTS?....lol....have fun.
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Postby Leah06 » Sun Sep 12, 2004 8:18 pm

great timing for this topic. this will be fun! and you deserved it this week.
What you do with your life is only half of the equation, the other half, the more important half, is who you're with when you're doing it.
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Postby Leah06 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 12:03 am

ok here is my contribution:

Raindrops Of Love

My body begins to tingle
A smile wipes across my face
I feel my cheeks get hot
My mind is off in space.
I open the small box
And let my eyes fly
My heart beats even faster
Time seems to inch by.
My spirit begins to sink
My body starts to shake
Tears wall my eyes
My chest begins to ache.
The dam begins to crumble
My smile drowns in tears
My head begins to spin
Heart beat pounding in my ears.
I feel so empty
Love has brought me here
Everything goes blank
And I tremble alone in fear.
I found that where their is love
Their is also pain
It can be painful like a storm
And as beautiful as the rain.
What you do with your life is only half of the equation, the other half, the more important half, is who you're with when you're doing it.
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:04 pm

Love From Above

I'm lifted up. I'm floating.
I've never been so high.

I'm full of life. I'm full of love.
And you're the reason why.

Like oxygen or water -
I could not live without.

The lifesource of my being...
You're what I'm all about.

I thank you for tomorrow.
For every passing day.

You keep me breathing,
while you take my breath away.

Thank you for the giving.
For all you do and say.

You keep me breathing,
while you take my breath away.
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Postby Leah06 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:20 pm

thats beautiful!
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Postby Visionary » Sat Sep 18, 2004 7:19 pm

Congradulations Brenda Michelle..you win!....yours is excellent 2 Leah. Sorry so short...gotta go. Thanks for sharing.
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Sun Sep 19, 2004 10:53 pm

uhh thanks visionary... i think leahs was good also... uhh i will try to think of next weeks topic.
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