I Thought..
Author: Shy Surfer


I am torn into pieces over you
I thought you were my soul mate
It pains me that i told you all that stuff
I thought i would tell someone
I told you and now i can't talk to you
It is tearing me up inside
My feelings were poured out to you
Now we are seperated for the time being
I am so lost without you
But it has to be done
I will see you then


Comments on this poem/writing:

Amy ( -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 05:34 am

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Awww... that's so sweet... you write really well, my opinion on that won't change.
Raven ( -- Wednesday, June 22 2005, 02:54 am


You can talk to burden or stress, whenever. I'm still here, I'm too lazy to ever leave. And pull yourself together (pun intended), i like talking to you too
Name:                                           Remember Me

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