The Fool
Author: Counsellina


Shadows fall within these walls,
A clenching soul does burn,
Random words somehow escape,
"The fool in me returns"...

Depths of light do clamour,
A yearning message cries,
Random words somehow escape,
"Your soul within my eyes"...

Autumn leaves are changing,
Their flight in skies so cool,
Random words somehow escape,
"Indeed I played the fool"...

So unclear the future,
Lights opaque; divine,
Random words somehow escape,
"My love for you, supine"...


Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah G ( -- Friday, September 19 2003, 03:11 am

awesome work!

I really enjoyed reading that poem! Keep writing
John ( -- Saturday, September 27 2003, 07:16 pm


This is a very deep and well written work...excellent verse..
Meridian ( -- Wednesday, June 8 2005, 01:31 am

Leah G and John are my mouthpiece

They've said what I'm about to say, for I agree with them! Counsellina, you must be a relative of Shakespeare, for the stanzas that you've written had me spellbound!
Intriguing poet, very intriguing!
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