Me In Simple Words
Author: SweetVenom


Enthusiasm lost,
Excitement is past,
Entertainment is a farce,
Emptiness is the big cause.

Adding adjectives,
Albeit alliteration,
Always admiring,
Admitting allegiance.

Professional ploys,
Pondering persuasion,
Perspiring profusely,
Permanent paradigm.

Lacking common sense,
Losing the rhythm,
Lost in my own world,
Loving the unknown.

------- Author's Notes -------

I don't think someone will really understand those lines above. It is a very profound feeling I was going through.I just thought I need to pen them down with just words and not in sentences.Thanks for reading.


Comments on this poem/writing:

padma ( -- Friday, January 27 2012, 11:26 am

still not understanding

poem is sweet whereas the venom exists between the lines.
Will u post my poems on ur site? will have like a team of the pen...? for the year 2009 ,2010,and 2011.. from inspiration from u..
Name:                                           Remember Me

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