Author: LinzAy


~Would you believe my life would still be complete if tomorrow came without anything but you?

~I fear the day we may again meet. How would you act, what would you say? I don't think I could handle the look in your eyes....

~My hands are so empty without yours filling them in. Just as my heart is without your love.

~Stop loving him. If you continue to tear yourself apart what will remain for the next? What beauty will you have left to show?

~The colder and colder it gets, the more and more it hurts. Each embrace feels so hollow. Each kiss only a peck-no more passion. Each I love you seems so forced-I can see my breath. The further and further it gets, the more and more I cry.

~I wish I could forget about you as easily as you have forgotten me. But forgetting about you seems just as hard as forgetting how to breathe.

~Heaven wrapped around me once. Only visited for such a short time.

~In a past response to one of my poems was written a comment that I wish were a lie. It hurts to think this will never go away..."True love never dies"

~Wash over me. And I'll collapse from the weight of it all. Shattering as I hit the bottom.

------- Author's Notes -------

These are examples of how my poems usually start out. Just as a thought that needs to be completed. But I think these thoughts...may be complete already.


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