Love Me As Much
You showed me what you are worth
Only friends were then
I finally noticed what you ment.
I like you
I wished for "us"
I dreamed for you too.
Your geourgeous eyes
I knew your everything was worth my while.
I want to see your warm smile
Feel your soft touch
Most of all I want you
To love me just as much.
------- Author's Notes -------
I dont really like this one but it is ok considering i wrote it in 6th grade (3 years ago)
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Leah06 (184.108.40.206) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 01:12 am|
I guess no one likes this poem so yea....
|Roy (220.127.116.11) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 02:03 am|
You came a very long way but this this poem is just some past child and that is a treasure--the poem the poem
|Seizure (18.104.22.168) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 08:01 am|
If this is your early work.. you REALLY don't want to see mine :).
|Brandi (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, May 7 2003, 02:21 am|
hey seizure, i really love ur writing!! im doing my "early work" right now!! haha not a late bloomer just young. anyway id love to see ur early work if you still have it. sry leah it doesnt have anything to do w/ ur poem though it is better than many of mine. you really have a lot of talent for writing seizure and i really admire it.
|Leah06 (126.96.36.199) -- Wednesday, May 7 2003, 11:40 pm|
Ok i am glad you like Seizure's writing. I like it too. Yea this one wasent very good.
|priscilla (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, May 14 2003, 06:45 am|
i realy like your poems it preety good its not bad
|Leah06 (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, May 23 2003, 11:00 pm|
Thank you. I guess you werent that clear on if you liked it or not. But thanks for the coments.
|mario (220.127.116.11) -- Saturday, May 31 2003, 11:02 pm|
pretty good... pretty good...
|Leah06 (172.17.25.26) -- Tuesday, June 10 2003, 02:48 pm|
|Nikki (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, June 12 2003, 06:40 pm|
All though you seem not to like this peom very much,,it hit a cord with me.You are young and to write with such heart and feeling is unbelievable. I hope to see more of your work..early or not.
|Leah06 (22.214.171.124) -- Monday, June 23 2003, 04:09 pm|
Thanks a lot nikki for commenting on my poem. I like it just the same... its just as good as my others. And it diggs up painful memories. Again, thanks for the comments.
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