Asking You To Try
Author: Shan


Laying in bed, figuring out the day ahead
Thinking about all the words you've said
I'm sick of living in dread, just give me time, I'll pull ahead
I'm full of stress that I can't let go
I'm in a mess, covered from head to toe
Don't know which way to go
No thoughts to share, so I let them baist in a place in my mind
They collect there for some time and then connect to make a rhyme
I can't describe the way my head is aching
Thoughts are cold, my body's shaking
Minds been mistaken me and taken me away from where I want to be
You never see through to me, believe me
I am the way I am because of what you do to me
So rude to me, Misconstrued the way I go through with things
My minds gone rotten from all the thoughts and the way you twisted it
I've made a list of it, I'm risking it all
And you're pissed at it, I'll never fall
Well I don't care today about anything you have to say
You're in my way telling me I'm going to loose
Hold up and throw yourself in my shoes
Deal with my issue, deal with my blues
And choose for me what you think is right
Picture living your hole life in a fight
And at the sight of this life
You wish you could just turn off the light and give up on this life
It isn't bad enough I'm suicidal without your words
You're forever persueing to make it worse, I'm about to burst
Call 911, no screw that, just grab a hurse
Does it quench your thirst to hear me talking like this?
You little bi*ch, Well this is it
I don't care no more, cause you're full of sh*t
And I aint taking it, I forever hope you're forsaken
For all the granted you've taken me for
And here's where I begin my new life that I'm making
So begin by taken yourself aside and taking a look inside
And try to figure out why you degrate in your life
And making me hate on mine,
All I'm asking is that you try


Comments on this poem/writing:

shauntecka ( -- Saturday, August 7 2004, 10:30 pm

that was off the chain

Girl if i saw you today I will give you a big kiss cause you are right there in my shoes because that peom was off the chain. Keep up the talent (snip)
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