Technically Sound
15 May, 2003
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)


Like switchs we turn on and off
who we choose to be
Are reactions to environment
simply programed responses we have freed?

The mind, a highly evolved machine
wired tight, information flows
And if a temper didn't flare
a damaged gasket would we blow?

Love "turns on" a need to continue
with birth, a network we grow
So in death, all is not lost
since backed up data we still know

It's a beautifully designed schematic
each a unique energy cache
And if we do not maintain ourselves
Even the best system will inevitably crash


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CrYsTaL ( -- Friday, May 16 2003, 12:29 am


Great one Becky! Really liked the last part of this one! Hoping you write :)))))
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