I Could See The Sunrise
Author: Mental


i could see the sunrise
i could see the moon
i could feel the notion
that you'll be leaving soon.
i could hear the talk
whispering within
you'd stop talking
with lips so thin.
light in the room growing thinner
as the moon glimmers over
somehow eager to withdrawl
i throw my heart over my shoulder.


Comments on this poem/writing:

megan ( -- Wednesday, September 1 2004, 05:55 am


very deep , great job
Your Melody ( -- Thursday, September 2 2004, 02:25 am

no title

Wow...i mean,
joyce ivy ( -- Thursday, September 2 2004, 07:08 pm


very ,very deep..i like
Terrie* ( -- Friday, September 3 2004, 01:05 am

Mental, Fantastic job..very brilliant...

i love your detailed descrption, i could close my eyes and envision the sunrise and that far...... away moon...well done..
viper ( -- Friday, January 17 2014, 01:39 am


I get the feeling you were rejected as you gave your heart nowhere to put but over your shoulder. nice write
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