Its Not Right...
Author: Simik


the hidden feelings i cant control
they break out in silence, but they play their role
i cry myself to sleep each night
ever chanting "its not right"
i cant keep my tears under control
i cant let myself feel this way
its something i hate everyday
its not right to ignore my mind
but i am too worried about what i'd find
i let myself be ruled by emotion
its not me, but i guess its common
its not right
but i cant find it


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Monday, September 13 2004, 10:53 pm

nice rhythm

Simik....very good, and you're right, it's not right!
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