Slipping Away
Author: Ashlee


I feel invisible
surrounded by darkness
when i come into the room
nobody notices
I can slip away with no one
no one noticing
So why don't I slip away
and do us all a favor


Comments on this poem/writing:

barb ( -- Friday, October 8 2004, 07:47 pm

sometimes people don't realise

Ashlee people know you're there, but maybe because you are so quiet and no problem it feels like you're being ignored when really you're so trusted and so good that others can relax when you're around, which should make you proud ,that having you around "We can slip away".
Clive ( -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 02:31 pm


Being un-noticed I wish for at times,
but because of me I'm known not in a crowd,
I like to say hello, sit in frount of class, give my devils oppinion just for fun,
I sit in meetings and stir them up, it gets me noticed, oh and being English helps a lot,
Ashley you write very well never give up, A favour you will not be doing in just slipping away, carry on.
clive ( -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 04:42 pm

my granddaughter

This is from my granddaughter who's 13 and I'm worried about her feeling this way.Thanks for the positive comment.
barb ( -- Saturday, October 9 2004, 09:44 pm


guess who,the goofer It is suppose to say barb where the name clive is. oh she is my granddaughter.
Name:                                           Remember Me

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