Can You Tell Me?
Author: Terrie*


can you tell me
what makes me feel this way..
everytime I think of you
my fingers tingle
an electrical surge draws me totally out of control

I get chills
running up and down my spine
fill up in my eyes

my heart beats
ever so fast
my breathing feels like I'm about to pass

my mind
I find myself totally out of control
as it draws an illusion
of me locked in your embrace..

------- Author's Notes -------

....HE IS.....such a beautiful illusion.....


Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive ( -- Thursday, October 28 2004, 08:35 pm

Love your thoughts

This illusion is so real, to touch in a special way, not in body but through though and soul,
Your heart beats more for the power together you both will find,

Love your words but no illusion is this feeling
Terrie* ( -- Friday, October 29 2004, 06:24 pm

Clive, as always...

your comments are always a boost to my heart..i always look forward to your comments...i love each and every one..

(whispering) Thank you........ @}--,-
Melissa L ( -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 03:53 pm

nice poem

I like this a lot...its great!!!
Terrie* ( -- Saturday, November 6 2004, 01:40 am

Melissa L. glad to know...

that you liked this..thanx i appreciate your feed back..
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