Wrapped So Tight Around You
21 November, 2004
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)


To know how much my life was wound around you
Every choice was "what would you think"
And yet you thought I didn't love you
...That I never thought of you
So I always failed

So many opportunities were lost
Friendships and love pushed away
As not to disappoint you
To always do the right thing

I had so many chances to truly rebel
Almost all of them I pushed away
Because I knew...
I knew what you would say

I could only dream of doing
The things I wanted to do
Those that I could not
Because I was wound too tight close to you

I tried so hard not to disappoint you
But still somehow..... I always did


Comments on this poem/writing:

jackie ( -- Wednesday, January 5 2005, 10:23 pm

i almost

i almost cried i was so damn touched i hope that you can write more poems that make me feel so much better i feel thats what i always thought but couldnt say thank you so much this poem is beautiful!~!~!~!
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