Even If
Author: WilTheThrill


I hate her seeing her here,
loved her through the years,
promised we'd never bring each other to tears,
im singing a happier tune,
even though we're responsible,
and never immune,
to a heartbreak,
we've got to pick it up,
bring it on, never look back,
no matter how much it sucks,
brush yourself off,
if love is ended,
then that love wasnt true,
even if you think about messages sended,
backstabbed not befriended,
even if you remember the good times,
the bad soon follow,
write about it in dumb rhymes,
dont hold that stuff in,
it will tear you apart,
sooner the pain is gone,
the healing can start.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Wil ( -- Saturday, January 29 2005, 08:51 pm


I'm begining to miss Terries extremely nice comments lol
Terrie* ( -- Saturday, January 29 2005, 09:28 pm

i'm here just for you ...Wil......

didn't realize ya missed me that much..never been missed B-4...i like the feelin'...feels GOOD :-)
Hun, you know very well that eventually i would of came back to read you..busy life ..busy job..busy me....caint keep this die-hard a rather different way i can relate to your words only thing is that ....yea, love ended between he and i...and believe me i was very angry with him cause it ended he promised we would grow old together..but you know it ended when death took him from me...the healin' starts that i'm back to square one "missin' his love" i'll always miss that...he was my first love..'aye what can i say i love bein' romanced......i believe if you search you may one day find the perfect REAL love..OR it may find you...i really believe....I LOVE YOUR STYLE IN POETRY...i will wait patiently for the next post...sorry 'bout that..i'm still here among the rest..sometimes i just sit in silence...but i'm here..thanx for the comment of missin' my comments...LOL...the best to you in 2005...
Wil ( -- Wednesday, February 2 2005, 02:05 am

lol thanks Terrie

thanks a lot, i understand being busy and everything it just helps when someones there ya know? I
Terrie* ( -- Wednesday, February 2 2005, 03:30 am


your very much welcomed...yes i know...believe me i understand and feel where your heart is...ya know me ..i'm always be here....Terrie*
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