What's Going On?
Author: Britney


Whats going on in this world of mine?
What's going on this life seems so rough.
I feel so lost... I feel like i'm in some
type of ditch. What's going on it's just so tough?

I feel no light... What's going on why so tough?
I feel like crying but the tears won't come out.
I feel like a failure but everyone says i'm not.
I seem as if i'm willing to give up and won't
strive again.. What's going on it's just so tough?

I try I really do but doesn't seem to please very
much. I'm writing what I feel inside. I need
to express every bit. I feel like losing control
but I cannot. What's going on it's just so tough?

I feel like a failure I can't try. I try to strive
but I won't survive. I feel like crying but it won't
let out. I feel like a nothing i'm, good at that.

What's going on it's just so tough

------- Author's Notes -------

I guess it explains most....


Comments on this poem/writing:

aimee aka bubz ( -- Sunday, May 1 2005, 05:34 am


hey brit you explain wat i feel aswell.its so hard to put in words isnt it!but yer i got some new poems too.
Britney ( -- Sunday, May 1 2005, 05:45 am


I don't even know how to explain sometimes... that poem was like a tongue twister wanting to come out but not fully getting what needs to come out it came out like in sloppy words.. news poem oo thats good ill chek then out...
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