How I Feel..
Author: Shy Surfer
How I feel...
It is a empty hole...
Going on and on for eternity.
With souls lingering around it.
Trying....Trying to enter,
But can't succeed.
It is not you that is messed up,
My heart is in agony from past times..
Mending,so far, has not been possible...
I will let you know when it is fixed...
Just maybe you will help...
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, April 29 2005, 09:52 pm|
this is great !i feel the depth of what your puttin' out on this.thanx for sharin'.
|anonymous (220.127.116.11) -- Friday, April 29 2005, 10:14 pm|
Shy!...time will heal your pain...don't keep her hanging too long....mine waited 9 years..she must of felt I was worth it..I am so blessed now..so I know you too will mend and it will be just a memory of past....from another surfer of "Pipeline,sandy beach, makapu"
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