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Cherry Blossom
Author: Capricorn

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boy kisses girl
under cherry tree--
love blossoms

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Haiku form

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (216.191.60.73) -- Wednesday, June 1 2005, 04:56 am

I like

So simple the way love is. very good cap. Short but sweet. just like you.
Meridian (64.12.116.197) -- Wednesday, June 1 2005, 10:46 pm

sweet

Cap, real good! These few words says a whole lot!
Haiku! I love your style! Keep them poetic juices flowing!
Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Thursday, June 2 2005, 12:15 am

Thanks

Thanks Barb -- (I'm not always so sweet -- lol!!)
Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Thursday, June 2 2005, 12:17 am

Thanks Meri

Yes I like these Japanese forms of writing, but I can't often write whet I want to in a few words. LOL!!
 
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