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Plead No More
1 June, 2005
Author: Mike

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You stare a me.
Your eyes plead for forgiveness.
I stare back,
My eyes frozen.

You glance away,
Then back at me again.
My face says it all.
F**k you.

It doesn't matter how many looks you give,
How many times you cry.
The only thing that matters is
That I won't be crying when you die.

------- Author's Notes -------

I feel hate is one of the strongest emotions a person can feel. It is certainly hard to destroy.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tarna (66.72.31.26) -- Wednesday, June 8 2005, 05:57 am

Ouch..

This one stung. Harsh and to the point. Though hate is one of the strongest emotions it is only weakened by forgiveness. Hate wastes too much energy to hold on to. I hope you find your peace with the feeling in this poem.
Yanny (82.31.4.101) -- Wednesday, June 8 2005, 07:27 pm

...

Hate is strong yes, but you can't truly hate someone without despising them or loving them. You can hate someone for loving them too much for no reason.
steph (207.200.116.136) -- Sunday, October 23 2005, 03:00 am

they'll always ask

i agree with you hate is the strongest of emotions and always the hardest to bury. for me at least. good work.
 
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