Author: Jim


commit my blood
life's meanings revealed
the reverberation of desire
communicated to the end
expressed as love, deep am i
plateau of pain
worn on are we rarely compromised
simple as a child captivated Yet
easily so complicated for
love wounds much - and fruition never in hand


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Britney ( -- Monday, June 13 2005, 02:12 pm


AWESOME poem. just loves it! so fab LOL!
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