Author: Britney


If I had to say goodbye I would have a frown
If I had to lose you a tear would drop to the ground
If you asked if I loved you... my answer would be yes
If I could hold you in my arms I would love that
If I was sad you would make me smile
If I was in denial you would make point of the trial
If you gave me one last kiss I would keep the memory
for life.
If I smile I always tend to make you smile back you say it's
just something that makes you relax
If I see your all mad it makes me sad inside... it makes me
wanna die.
If I had to say the best accomplishment I have ever made it would
be I found you and I loved you from the very first day
If someone told me I would never see you again I might
as well die and make that day be then end
If you ask if I need you I would say "yes" without no
If you asked me to explain you in words I wouldn't be able to
because it's to hard to understand...
If someone asked me why i made this poem I would have no
response... I guess it was the instincts from the heart..

------- Author's Notes -------

Hey.. thanks for reading it if ya did... haven't written for like a month or so... but i'm back! enjoy!


Comments on this poem/writing:

Angel in Tears ( -- Thursday, June 9 2005, 08:08 pm


(Sorry for the bold title xD!) Missed your writings girl! Glad your back! Welcome back! Oh gosh! lol Really good poem! Can't wait to read more
Meridian ( -- Thursday, June 9 2005, 08:15 pm

Lady B

Hail to Lady B! Under a love spell, eh? That's so heavenly! Listen to the angels sing! Like A.I.T said, I'm glad you're back too! You kept everyone's spirits up!! Love-o-rama poem!
Britney ( -- Thursday, June 9 2005, 08:33 pm

Hey Hey Hey

Thanks both for such lovley comments... makes me feel all happy inside *smiles*! im glad to keep everyone up
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