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Odd Girl Out
Author: Casey

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She poured her heart out to the rain
But nothing could get rid of the pain

She tried so hard to ignore the remarks
But she was so lost and alone in the dark

What made her friends turn so cruel?
To make her look so much like a fool

They called her so many foul names
They were playing such a horrible game

She chopped off her hair because of her anger
Her classmates had put her in grave danger

But the girls at school only got worse
Yet something inside her finally burst

All the lies and rumors just had to end
Even though she would still have no friends

She spotted some pills lying around
She soon got dizzy and fell to the ground

Her mother rushed her to the ER
While she wished upon a star

This didnít change her friendís evil ways
They still teased her for many days

She arrived back at school, with rumors floating around
But now inside her, courage she had found

She stood up to her enemy, her best friend
She would no longer follow this trend

She told her off, in all her fury
The other girl started to worry

But nothing could heal all the pain
No more would she cry out in the rain

For a new friend she had found
Who pulled her out of the ground

And helped her find
The courage inside

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Comments on this poem/writing:

akm (63.147.177.11) -- Monday, June 13 2005, 09:20 pm

good

this poem is good, i dont have ne thing inspiring to say keep writing
barb (66.46.230.183) -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 03:25 pm

sorry

What you had to go through gave you the talent to write and glad you found a friend that gives you courage.
barb (66.46.230.183) -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 03:27 pm

oh yea

by the way your writing is good, you described it so well.
Allen (58.38.9.144) -- Tuesday, March 25 2008, 03:55 pm

Very good poem.

This poem describes the story so great.
sarah (50.92.163.182) -- Monday, October 24 2011, 03:03 am

friken amazing

holy crap this sii so good i loved it and it was on a topic that i'm really passionate about too so keep on writing
 
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