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Summer
Author: Britney

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The tree's sway and blows the breeze
The sun hit's my skin with glee.
The birds churp with songs of the heart.
The grass is green again such beauty that
sprouts.
The flowers are all beautiful and have beautiful
scents the aroma is such a wonderful bliss.
The warmness overwelms my skin.....
The tempature is right
Signs that summer is here

------- Author's Notes -------

First time writing like this.... Britney

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.100.197) -- Wednesday, June 15 2005, 04:34 pm

super cool

Supa coolio B! You sure this is your first time? Your poem, "Summer" doesn't seem like a poem of a beginner, but of an advanced, skillful poet who has written like this before! The sense of smell and sight made it seem realistic! This is just extraordinary! So startling, so magnifico!
Britney (67.136.109.253) -- Wednesday, June 15 2005, 08:52 pm

Yo!!!!

lol... gosh you always put a smile on my face or make me laugh cause of your wonderful comments! thanks... i'm glad you liked it! thanks yeah first time writing like that...! i'm glad it seemed realistic!.
 
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