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Heart Shattered Dreams
Author: Britney

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In the place where I lay in
Heart shattering dreams
There is no end to this mess
You can dream but wake
up to endless horror of
the day. Number of
screams I hear echo
each and everyday.
Shall I begin to tell
you why? My insanity
inside. I feel no place
in this hell. i try to express
with no feelings found.
Everything is not what it
seems it's an endless
journey like me walking
streams.I close my eyes
see the dark figure this is
this best place to stay.
Since everything else
seem to be
Heart Shattered Dreams...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

martin Vann (63.25.188.250) -- Friday, June 10 2005, 06:05 pm

I love this poem, sorry, I could not say so

This is a wonderful poem and I tried to express, my gratitude, to hear the words of your heart. But, we are now cut off, our hearts are limited to so, many words, then we get the word, COMMENT is to long! Love your poem, wish you could have read, what I had to say. I just loved your poem.
Britney (67.136.99.19) -- Friday, June 10 2005, 07:28 pm

MV,

thank you for the comment...! it means so much... i didn't think it would really get a response on this poem but i did. i wish i could have read it too but its all good! i'm glad u loved it. one day the words just came together....
THANKS SO MUCH AGAIN
 
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