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Because Of You
14 June, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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you captured my heart
when i surrendered it

you placed a protection upon my soul
when i submitted it's whole

you accepted my love
when i released it all

i have one dream
one wish i want to come true
and that is of being there with you

i'd give up all i have
to make the illusion of you
be ever so real
i'd kneel
i'd pour out my heart

my reward as i pray
all this just for you
as i watch God place
you in my arms today

my whole life
has changed
when i became your wife

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (66.46.230.183) -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 04:07 pm

awww

Terrie you never cease do you? Such beautiful words put together just right.
Taylor james (81.138.52.139) -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 08:45 pm

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you never fail to bring a tear to my eye hun,your words are so beautiful, LONG LIVE TERRIE* AN HER HUBBY love it as always
Terrie* (66.81.128.123) -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 09:10 pm

Barb,

thank you, your comments mean so much to me, love you too doll, as long as my heart has life, my words will spread just as my love...
Terrie* (66.81.128.123) -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 09:20 pm

Taylor,

thank you T.J , your comment draws great meanin' to me.tears of LOVE come out of ones own heart, what you have read is as much a part of you, we are all spiritualy fused together, many times i place the comments ,withn my heart and feel deeper of their meanin' and combine it with what he and i share as well. LOVE is LOVE and we must take real good care of such a fragile feelin' just as we do with the heart. i send a cyper ROSE of LOVE from me to you..look at it closely,deeply feel and touch the love i share today and everyday and leave behind long after my heart has no more breath and a beat.i leave it behind every tear shed.
The Unrequited Dream (207.144.229.164) -- Tuesday, June 14 2005, 09:48 pm

Beautiful Work!

I love this poem... it's the perfect vow of love, and I hope someday to feel those feelings for someone. :)
Terrie* (69.85.134.110) -- Wednesday, June 15 2005, 05:33 am

Unrequited Dream

thank you, your warm comment means soooo much to me, do not rush "LOVE" yes someday love will be find you too, and you will share many feelings, and you will have the rest of your lives to share that passion of that perfect love.
 
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