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I Wish
14 June, 2005
Author: Pierce

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I wish to find her
To see her
To hear her
To know she is there
I wish to call her beautiful
To never lie
To make her laugh
And never cry
I wish, in front of my friends
To show her off
And hold her hand
To confess to the world
That I’m the luckiest man
I wish, when she’s without make-up
And in her sweats
To tell her she’s pretty
And looking her best
I wish to hold her close
And hold her tight
To watch the stars
All though the night
Till she falls asleep
And I hear her heart beat deep
To kiss her forehead
And drift softly to bed
If I had one wish
To let it come true
It’d be my wish
To be with you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah g (204.112.168.39) -- Tuesday, August 9 2005, 11:26 pm

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sweet work, keep it up and who knows maybe one day your wish will come true!
pierce (24.3.47.161) -- Thursday, August 11 2005, 07:42 am

thanks

thanks leah g.....but i'm afraid that particular wish will never come true
Marilyn A F Longfellow (67.76.154.27) -- Saturday, August 27 2005, 11:40 pm

I Wish

As I read your poem I was wishing U were talking to me! Because you see that is what a woman usually wants a man to wish for! But I haven't found too many men wanting half of what U wrote! That must make U a whole man. Nice to meet U Pierce, stay sweet.
pierce (24.3.47.161) -- Sunday, September 4 2005, 03:05 am

thanks

thank you. im glad you like it my poem...and im glad you think that. there is so much more to this poem that whats writen.....i just could'nt fit all of it down...again thank you
Kim Thelen (63.26.235.254) -- Saturday, December 31 2005, 01:07 am

it's the best title i've heard for a long time

This really gets me deep into the whole world of love and that sort of thing. It really makes me think of how much you like me.
 
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