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Feel With Me
15 November, 2003
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Like an arrow through the heart,
A passion greater than before,
A feeling so intense,it brings me to my knees,
So much more feelings than before,
A need to have you by my side for now,
Today, and all our tomorrows,
You see the love within my eyes,
When I’m with you, when I hear you,
Like a teenager I feel that first love,
A love we never forget,
Tis a feeling never that will be matched,
A passion that grows with each breath I take,
Do you see and feel just how much you mean to me?
Will you help me with these feelings I have for you?
Teach me for I am here to learn,
Show me, as my eyes are open to you,
Talk to me my ears are ready to listen,
Listen to my heartbeat next to yours,
Take me in your arms, feel our thoughts,
Not different yet the same as yours,
Wanting nothing different,
Wanting love, believing in us
Together we can ride out any storm

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Bravo! Bravo! (206.216.222.93) -- Tuesday, November 18 2003, 01:57 am

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!

I loved this one! It was just as intimate as "It Was Meant to Be". I thought this one very touching and warm. Very beautiful, nice work. Like I said, keep writing, I'll keep reading.
 
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