You Make Me Feel
Author: Scorpio


It's hard for me to comprehend what I feel inside.
The only thing I understand is where I know to hide.
But after meeting you, I feel like words come out with ease.
You understand and listen, yet you play and yet you tease
You're wonderful to be around and always by my side.
I can't see life without you, you're the one whom I confide
You love me for what I am and that will never change.
My love for you is equal; for it's distance, I can't range
You're perfect in every way with your talents and your flaws.
You're the best I've ever met, you make me beautiful because-
I'm happy who I am since you love me and I love you.
I'm so glad that we're together and hope there's more that we'll be through.

------- Author's Notes -------

For my love. I wish this could have been better.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Friday, June 17 2005, 05:28 pm

Isn't that sweet

Love. The type of love that'll make you float on a carpet like Aladdin. Love. The type of love that'll make you sing until the dishes in the sink break. Oh, what a feeling! It's good to know you're happy! Our gorgeous prince charming always makes us show our gums! Super super poem Scorpio!
Scorpio ( -- Sunday, June 19 2005, 10:40 pm

I suppose

At first, it was only the kind of love that two children have when they are chasing eachother and catching fireflies in a summer night. It's funny how in such a little time it could blossom to something beautiful and more cherished than any of the wisest lovers. It's amazing how deep someone can feel to this and sometimes I just can't contain myself. Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment, Meri!
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