Pointless by Pierce

It's kinda fuckin pointless....isn’t it?
When it gets you nowhere,
When your back where you started
With nothing the bare.....You see,...
I'm blind to the sign that is there
To show the feelings inside
I'm blind to what's really being said,
When my mind and head are else where.
I don't know what it means or how
To read it, whether it's real or fake.
So.... when i say it's pointless,
I wish that it wasn’t....
I wish that is was real, and i could see...
and read it.
But since...that's not the case....
And i can't see the face....of the one I
Wish was there....though the pain...
And despair,.....
It really is kinda fuckin pointless...
isn’t it?

Marilyn A F Longfellow (67.76.154.27) -- Saturday, August 27 2005, 11:49 pm

Pointless
Hey I feel your rage in this poem,and heartache too. But U must go on or it will bury U. Your heart of love I've read so clear, just throw her out of it my dear!

barb (207.245.229.171) -- Friday, September 2 2005, 10:47 pm

don't give in
I hear your anger and frustration. If I got the right message from this I got that you are blind with your eyes is that right or is it you were blinded by love either way keep moving on. prove to yourself and others you can do it.

pierce (24.3.47.161) -- Sunday, September 4 2005, 03:14 am

thanks
thaks....both of you. this poem was filled with frustration...and i was blinded.....and still am for that matter. you see there is someone out there that i have fallin in love with....and she has no idea. but i think now it's time that she did...b/c i think i get it now. b/c if i don't speak up she's gonna pass me by....it's just that past expirences had persuaded me not to risk it. if you have anything to say....be it advice or even a good luck..... thank you both

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